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A Date to Remember

Yesterday was a big day in our history. Let me tell you about a very mean guy. His name was Osama Bin Laden. He is from Afghanistan and is a leader of a group of people who want to hurt others. Ten years ago when my mom was pregnant with me he planned an attack on America. My mom was sad because almost 3,000 people died from the attacks. So after ten years we finally found Osama Bin Laden and killed him. This was done by the Navy. The date was May 1st, 2011. I am in third grade. This is date we should all remember.

By Faith C.
Mrs. Smith’s Class
3rd Grade

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Comments on: "A Date to Remember" (7)

  1. Nancy Barth said:

    It’s good to share how we feel about events. Have you read the book September Roses by Jean Winter?

    • Faith C. said:

      No but my mom just put it on hold for me at our library. Thanks for the good idea.

      • Faith C. said:

        That was a good book. That was nice of those ladies to do that with their roses. It was a true story too.

  2. Mrs. Smith said:

    Very nice, Faith! Also, congrats on your WQPT award. I loved your story.

  3. Arielle said:

    Good job Faith I loved both of your stories!!!!!!

  4. edith marquez said:

    your story was super good i loved it

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