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Vacation Bible School

by Allen C.

first submission: I liked Vacation Bible School. It had Chadder’s theater, snacks, drama, crafts, and games. It was the last week in June. My crew leaders were Ashlie and Jordan. They are nice. My friend Clayton was in my crew. Our crew was number nineteen. My favorite song that week was called You You You. It was a fun week. I like Vacation Bible School.

second submission: Vacation Bible School was fun. It was in the last week of June. The theme was Sky. We had music, Chadder’s Theater, snacks, drama, crafts, and games. My favorite was Chadder’s theater. On Friday we found out who the bad guy was. My favorite song was called You You You. My crew leaders were Ashley and Jordan. My friend Clayton was in my crew too. We were in crew nineteen. I like Vacation Bible School.

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