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Rainbow

by Kaden B., age 10

I sit inside and read as I hear the thunder growl
and I hear the winds howl
and wonder when the storm shall pass
then a couple minutes later I look out the window and say
alas the storm has passed and I see a rainbow shining brightly

Comments on: "Rainbow" (4)

  1. Diane Owens's avatar

    Great job, Kaden. You made me feel the storm come and go.

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    Elizabeth B. said:

    Nice descriptive words!!

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    The Purple Pheonix said:

    Amazing!

  4. Unknown's avatar

    GOOD JOB KADEN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.

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