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The Beginning of Wings and Other Stuff

wingsThe writing group – Elsy, Mimi, Sophie, Patti and Bunnie – submitted Chapter 1 of their fantasy, Wings and Other Stuff and they’re off to an excellent start. In this alternative world, there are portals, telepathy, transformations, and of course, wings. Check it out! Also, the authors want you to know that they based their characters on themselves. For a guide to which character represents which writer, look for their “Authors’ Note” in the Comments section below the story.

It’s a Mystery

mysteryToday Mikaela added a mysterious character to the Mystery Group Project, which means we now have three writers working on this story. If you’d like to be the fourth, go here to find out how. It’s easy and fun and something you should definitely do right now.

Elsy told Mikaela what she thinks might happen next in The Magic Sword of Trestia (go to the end to read the comments) and Mikaela would like to hear what you think of her Science Fiction Novel so far. Follow the link and leave her a comment in the “Leave a Reply” box.

More Science Fiction, Sure to Entertain You

Read Chapter Two of Mikaela’s Science Fiction Novel and see how evil and powerful Samus’ enemies are.

Welcome New Writing Team (and some other things)

team_workThis is awesome! Five writers – Elsy, Mimi, Sophie, Patti and Bunnie – have come together to create and develop this new, ongoing story, Wings and Other Stuff. I think it’s going to be a very compelling fantasy. Follow the link to read the introduction and let them know what you think. Welcome to the site, everyone! And thanks, Elsy, for inviting your friends. I hope you all have a great time.

See Neve’s response to Mikaela’s suggestions for Neve’s story, Flight (posted at the bottom of the story).

Elsy continued the Adventure #2 Group Project by introducing a new character in a mysterious way, and the Fantasy Group Project by using an existing character in a humorous way.

Thanks to all of you for making this site grow bigger and better every day. You amaze me.

Welcome Christian!

school-kids-schoolhouse-thumbChristian, our newest writer on the site, does a great job sharing what his school day is like in his narrative, What I Do in School. He also continued the Fantasy Group Project (which means we now have seven writers working on this story -WOOT!) Christian is Mikaela’s 7-year-old brother (which means we also have another family working together at All Write with Me – DOUBLE WOOT!). I’m so happy you shared your writing and imagination, Christian. I hope you have a good time here!

Neve’s looking for suggestions for her next chapter of Flight. Follow the link to see Mikaela’s advice (posted at the bottom of the story) and offer your own suggestions.

Let’s Welcome Our Newest Writer!

welcomeWhat’s the best way to welcome our newest writer? By reading and commenting on this new, ongoing story, Flight. I know you’re going to love it. Neve includes excellent descriptions with plenty of action, mystery and rising tension. Awesome job, Neve! I’m so glad you found us and can’t wait to see what happens next. 

More Auras

rainbowChapter 2 of Elsy’s Auras provides some answers, but, like any great story, these answers lead to more questions, more mystery and more adventure. Go read it now. You’ll be glad you did.

Another Group Project

octopusMikaela has started a new story under Fantasy Group Projects which I’ve cleverly called Fantasy #2. There are sailors and shipwrecks and whirlpools and mermaids. And if that’s not enough to get you excited, there’s also an evil emperor octopus. I know Mikaela would love someone to jump in and continue this story. Why not you?

We’re Starting a Book Club!

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book stackMikaela asked if she could start a book club here on All Write with Me and I think it’s an excellent idea. Writing inspiration often comes from reading great books. Also, there’s no better way to find out what works (or doesn’t work) than by discussing what you like (or don’t like) about a book and why you liked it (or didn’t) with others.

So, if you’d like to discuss books with other site visitors, go to the new Book Club section. You’ll find it listed over there on the right, below the Group Projects section.

Mikaela would like to start off the club with The Magician’s Nephew by C.S. Lewis. Click on this link to read the book on your computer (it’s free).

If you’d like to discuss a different book, just let me know and I’ll add it to the list under the Book Club section.

There’s More!

In Chapter Three of The Magic Sword of Trestia, Gemla sets off to save her kingdom (and possibly the world) from the evil Blizzara. She’s bringing some interesting and loyal characters with her on this quest which is good because I’m betting it’s not going to be easy to fight Blizzara.

The Magic Sword of Trestia

swordI’m happy to announce a brand-new ongoing story I know you’ll enjoy. Mikaela’s The Magic Sword of Trestia is filled with good and evil forces, hope and battles, royalty and servants. There’s also magic and elves. Follow the link to read the first two chapters. You’ll be glad you did.

Awesome job, Mikaela. Your imagination soars!

Two New Submissions You Need to Read Right Now

guy downElsy starts Auras with just enough information and background on her seven main characters to make them captivating. She’s given all seven characters well-defined personalities and talents and they all come from different countries. She’s got something special in mind for these characters and I can’t wait to see where this story is heading.

Mikaela added to the Fantasy Group Project by letting Edwinn’s best friend provide some answers regarding those strange stones. She’s also set Edwinn on what is sure to be an exciting and dangerous quest.

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Teachers: Fulfilling the Common Core Just Got Easier

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Leap into the Common Core 
with No Ordinary Lizard

These free writing guides fulfill all 10 writing standards in the Common Core by combining examples and activities generated from the middle-grade novel No Ordinary Lizard with the instruction and opportunities available here at All Write with Me.

Inside the Guides

  • Thought-provoking questions to facilitate opinion writing
  • Research topics to generate informative writing
  • Examples from the book No Ordinary Lizard to foster narrative writing
  • A list of standards addressed by each activity
  • Links to relevant instructional pages on allwritewithme.com

From the Book

  • Research topics in science, biology, mythology, history, oceanography, space and more
  • Character relationships, character growth, core themes
  • A variety of narrative techniques to emulate

Download your free writing guide
and start fulfilling the Common Core writing standards today!

3rd Grade Lizard Writing Guide

4th Grade Lizard Writing Guide

5th Grade Lizard Writing Guide

Tip:
If you use Adobe Reader XI to view and save a copy of the writing guide, you can customize your guide by adding your own notes and highlighting your selections. These notes and selections can be removed/updated every year to adjust to the changing needs of your classroom.

Free downloads of Adobe Reader XI are available here.

These guides were developed by the author, Diane Owens, in collaboration with certified teachers Nancy Barth and Alyce McConaghy.

New Submission

Read how Allen C. feels about second grade here.

Sounds like you had a fun teacher, Allen. Thanks for sharing!

Welcome Elizabeth & Kaden

I’m happy to welcome two new writers to All Write with Me – Elizabeth B., 7th grade, and her brother Kaden B., age 10.

Elizabeth submitted Champions in Friendship, a great story about the value of friends, and Dolphins, an oral report filled with fascinating facts on these intelligent creatures.

Kaden submitted a well-written poem about changing weather, Rainbow.

Follow the links to read their submissions. Then feel free to welcome them to the site by leaving them a comment.

Update on the Purple Pheonix’s ongoing story

WOOT! The Purple Pheonix has finished Chapter 1. Like all good chapter endings, it makes you want to read Chapter 2 (which is hopefully coming soon, right, Purple Pheonix?) He’s also decided on the title, The Group. He’s been working hard and often, so follow the link and leave him a comment!

Want to make a point? Write a persuasive essay.

If you’d like to explain how you feel about something or if you want to convince others to feel the same way, try writing a persuasive essay.  First, make sure readers understand your point by stating your opinion right away. Then use related information or facts to support why you feel this way.

To see a well-organized persuasive essay, check out “My Vote“. Allen C. tells us what he would have done in the very first sentence. He uses the rest of the essay to explain why he would have done it.

New in Share your work

Find out some fascinating facts about Dwight D. Eisenhower. Posted by Faith C.

Puppies and wolves

Want to read about lots of puppies making lots of trouble? Read Arielle’s The Tale of Ten Puppies. It made me laugh. It also made me glad they don’t live in my house!

Also, the Purple Phoenix created a great wolf character. He’s looking for suggestions for the perfect name. Look in the “comments” under the first blue welcome box on this page to see his description of the wolf and to give him your suggestions.

More additions and congratulations!

I just found out Nichole T. from Mrs. Smith’s class won an honorable mention in the WQPT/PBS writing contest – awesome job, Nichole!

Faith’s brother, Allen, won second place for 1st grade – WOOT!

Faith and Allen have agreed to share their winning stories here. You can find them here and here.

Excellent job Nichole, Faith and Allen and thanks for sharing!

New story in Share your work

Faith posted a well-written story about Osama bin Laden. It’s called “A Date to Remember.” You can find it under Share your work or click on the title to jump to it now. Feel free to comment on what Faith has to say and how you feel about yesterday’s events.

Addition to Group projects

The Purple Pheonix added to the adventure story in Group projects. It’s getting really interesting – check it out!

New story in Share your work

The Purple Pheonix is working on a fantasy novel and has shared some of it with us in Share your work. It’s loaded with action and adventure. Follow the above link to check it out. Don’t forget to leave The Purple Pheonix a comment while you’re there.

New Group projects story started!

Yay! Someone has started an adventure story in Group projects and it’s a great beginning! To read it, go here. If you’d like to continue the story, select the small “reply” button directly under the entry. Remember, the big “Leave a reply” box is for starting new stories. Enjoy!

Another post in Share your work

WOOT! Faith has added our second story. It’s about the Titanic and it’s called “Separated.” Check it out!