If you’ve been reading this group story, you’ve got to be wondering what that stone is. Elsy, a talented new writer on the site, gives us the answer in her imaginative addition to the Fantasy Story.
I like how Elsy brought in a character mentioned in the beginning of the story to help explain what’s going on now. This is an excellent example of building on what came before to keep cranking up the tension.
I also like how she used descriptive detail to make us feel like we’re experiencing what Edwinn is going through.
Fantastic job, Elsy, and welcome to All Write with Me!
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