With Scary Sea Creature, Anne shares another example of how she changed a flat, telling sentence into a vivid picture.
Actually, Anne’s description of the sea creature was much scarier than this picture. Unfortunately, I don’t draw, so it was the best I could do with clip art.
I liked how Anne described the creature and also included a clear description of her main character’s reaction and response. Thanks for showing us how this is done, Anne!
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