All Write with Me now includes an ongoing play! The Sword of the Winds, written by The Purple Phoenix, already includes a Princess of Peace, a dragon and a wind-thrasher. There’s also plenty of trouble – a raid, a kidnapped queen, stolen royal treasury, and a lost sacred relic. All in the first scene! Be sure to come back often to read this play as it unfolds. Knowing The Purple Phoenix, it’s bound to excite you all the way through.
Follow the link to read it now. When you come back, you’ll find The Sword of the Winds under the Share your work tab. Also, be sure to let The Purple Phoenix know what you think of his play by leaving a comment in the “Leave a Reply” box at the end of his page.
Read how Allen C. feels about second grade here.
Sounds like you had a fun teacher, Allen. Thanks for sharing!
Read Allen C.’s review of the Angel Park All Stars Series here.
Thanks for sharing, Allen. It sounds like a great series.
Check out Elizabeth B’s report, Terriers and Other Dogs. It’s a great example of an opening paragraph that not only relates to the intended readers, but also lets readers know what to expect from the report. Well done, Elizabeth.
I’m happy to welcome two new writers to All Write with Me – Elizabeth B., 7th grade, and her brother Kaden B., age 10.
Elizabeth submitted Champions in Friendship, a great story about the value of friends, and Dolphins, an oral report filled with fascinating facts on these intelligent creatures.
Kaden submitted a well-written poem about changing weather, Rainbow.
Follow the links to read their submissions. Then feel free to welcome them to the site by leaving them a comment.
What do you do if the characters in your story speak a different language than your readers? What do you do if that language is intermixed with your readers’ language? And what do you do if the foreign language doesn’t even really exist?
See The Purple Pheonix’s creative and efficient way of handling this situation in his newly revised Fantasy Novel.
Great solution, Purple Pheonix!
The Purple Pheonix and The Blue Dragon are once again writing together. Read their latest addition to The Pokémon Story. I’m pretty sure one of their characters is about to get into some big-time trouble.
I’m happy to say The Purple Pheonix has conquered his writer’s block. Click on the titles to read the latest additions to The Group and The Pokémon Story (which he is now writing alone).
Glad you’re back, Purple Pheonix. Please tell the Blue Dragon I hope to see him again some day!
The Purple Pheonix and the Blue Dragon have teamed up to launch a new story, The Pokémon Story, in Share your work.
The Blue Dragon has added to the ongoing science fiction story in Group projects. Read it here. (Remember to scroll down.) If you’d like to add to the story, select the “reply” link under the Blue Dragon’s addition.
The Purple Pheonix is now on Chapter 5 of The Group. Impressive!
Happy reading and don’t forget to comment! I’m sure they’d love to hear your opinions.
The Purple Pheonix is on Chapter 3 of The Group and has written 1,280 words! Follow this ongoing adventure by clicking on the link. (Go ahead. I know you’ll like it.)
He’s also started a science fiction story in Group projects. Anyone can jump in and add to stories posted there. Click here and scroll down to read what he’s written. You can continue where he left off by selecting the small “reply” under his beginning dialogue. For complete instructions on how to add to Group projects, click here.
Excellent work, Purple Pheonix. Write on!
WOOT! The Purple Pheonix has finished Chapter 1. Like all good chapter endings, it makes you want to read Chapter 2 (which is hopefully coming soon, right, Purple Pheonix?) He’s also decided on the title, The Group. He’s been working hard and often, so follow the link and leave him a comment!
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